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Revising
to Eliminate Sentence Errors
Revise this paragraph to eliminate any sentence fragments,
run-ons, and misplaced modifiers. Number the sentences in your revision to correspond to the numbers
in the paragraph.
(31) When studying the
science of bubbles. It is easy to forget that bubbles are just plain fun. (32) Watch a group of
adults presented with a bubble wand and some bubble mix they won’t be able to resist blowing
bubbles. (33) If you want expert help, there are books that teach bubble tricks you can buy bubble
wands of all sizes and shapes. (34) Looking for successful bubble-solution recipes, the Internet is a
good place to start. (35) One bubble expert used a special solution to make thick bubbles, which he
put into sealed jars, once he kept a bubble in a jar for 340 days. (36) Using just his hands, I once
saw someone blow a huge bubble. (37) You can blow a bubble within a bubble. Two wands and a little
practice. (38) Which proves that knowledge and skill are more important than fancy equipment. (39) We
made the bubble solution from dishwashing liquid that we are using. (40) With the goal of blowing the
largest bubbles we can.
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